The Vision

There was a boy, a very strange enchanted boy. They say he traveled very far, very far, over land and sea. And then one day, he came my way. And this he said to me. "The greatest thing, you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return".

Wednesday, March 21, 2012

I Trip and I Fall

I trip and I fall.
You catch me.
Is that all?
Enough for me.

Attack of the Commas

My English teacher objected, to my over use, of commas,in my, writings,,.

They seemed to creap, in to my work, and appear, in all the wrong, places.

What, she, did, not k,n,o,w, was, I was very, poor, and, I was, u,s,i,n,g, this sh,,,tty, key,board that put th,e,s,e, moth,er, f,,k,in, commas ,,,,,,,,,,,

e,v,e,r,y, w,here,,,,.!